This is my Venn diagram. It gives you the places that are different to each other. The Similarities mean the same things. Miss Paton taught us how to compare things using a Venn diagram.
Tuesday, 13 May 2014
Hi Sa Kae, I liked the way how you told us a little bit about room 7. And i also like the way how you told us about how they play.when are you gonna post your next writing.
This is a comment about Sa Kae's piece of work with her friends.I really like the way how they told us what they did.
My Loving Mother!
My mum is a hard working lady, she is also funny.
She may sometimes get angry at me when I do some wrong things but after all her growlings she always tells me “I love you no matter what and I will never stop loving you”
Then I turn my frown upside down. She is such a beautie.
When she goes to work she always gives me a kiss and says “Goodbye” She always gives me hugs and kisses when I go to bed. She never lets anybody harm me. She is the perfect mother for me! She gives us healthy homes if we are very sick. She works very hard just for us. She is very special to me. I will never replace her at the end of her life because she will always be in my heart forever and ever!
She is the one who inspires me! She is like an angel! She is my super hero and she will always be!!! As I said, I will never replace her, I really mean it! I will never forget her because she will always be in my heart forever!
This story is about an old lady called Kuinileti and a young 9 year old girl named Evelina.The old lady Kunileti and the young girl were neighbours. Evelina would always come to the old ladys place because she is alone. The reason why she is alone because her husband died, the husband died because of diabetes why he got diabetes is because he ate too much sugary food and also stopped working. So now you know the reason why she is alone.Then she welcomed Evelina to come and eat and talk on the table. They were asking some questions on the table.Then Kunileti talked about her husband back in Samoa. After there taking Evelina took the dishes well Kunileti waters her garden.